Judge’s review of ‘Sarah & Katy and the Imagination Blankets’

Back in February, I entered “Sarah & Katy and the Imagination Blankets” in the Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards.

I found out in mid-October that my book was not among the winning entries. It would be a lie to say I wasn’t disappointed, but I also know the self-publishing industry is filled with a lot of talent and stiff competition, so I took heart in that.

This week, I received commentary from the judge who reviewed my book. The entry fee was well worth the positive reinforcement and marketing suggestions offered by the judge. The comments are included below:


Books are evaluated on a scale of 1 to 5, with 1 meaning “needs improvement” and 5 meaning “outstanding”. This scale is strictly to provide a point of reference, it is not a cumulative score and does not reflect ranking.

  • Structure, Organization, and Pacing: 5
  • Spelling, Punctuation, and Grammar: 5
  • Production Quality and Cover Design: 5
  • Plot and Story Appeal: 4
  • Character Appeal and Development: 5
  • Voice and Writing Style: 5

Judge’s Commentary:
Sarah and Katy and the Imagination Blankets is a delightful story that shows off Julie Stroebel Barichello’s writing chops. Young readers and their parents will be whisked away on an enjoyable journey with the characters in this book.

The story starts with action and dialogue that will instantly grab readers’ attention. The chapters are the perfect length to keep the pacing quick without losing some of the details. The plot follows a logical pattern but still provides the unexpected. Barichello uses a nice balance of dialogue and narrative to keep a smooth flow.

The quirky and fun front cover will draw attention of prospective readers. The back cover copy is intriguing and will surely compel people to open the book to check out the writing.

Barichello has excellent command of language, and she uses it to draw graphic word pictures. For example, when she describes how Sarah and Katy held the shovels at the beginning of chapter 9, readers will instantly have the image in their minds. This type of description is used skillfully throughout the book.

Marketing this book should be fun. Speaking at libraries and bookstores will draw quite a few people in, but I also think it would be great to add an interactive element to your website. Have fans describe how they’d use imagination blankets and encourage them to bring their friends on the journey with them. This would help grow your fan base in an entertaining way that won’t seem forced.

— Judge, 23rd Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards

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The books have arrived!

Shipment

The first hundred copies of “Sarah & Katy and the Book of Blank” arrived on the doorstep yesterday afternoon. (With a week and a half to spare before the book launch next Saturday … phew!) The first copies will be available for sale and signing at Prairie Creek Public Library in Dwight on Saturday, Nov. 21.

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The Elsa stage of writing when we ‘let it go’

The final version of “Book of Blank” was uploaded to press last Saturday.

For weeks leading up to that day, I had a constant internal chant of, “Come on, let’s go. Come on, let’s go. Get it done. Get it done.” I couldn’t wait to send it off for printing.

But after I finished the final read-through and skimmed the layouts onscreen one last time, reluctance bloomed in my chest. I didn’t want to click the Attach File button in CreateSpace’s author dashboard. I didn’t want to click Upload. The final flood of nerves and second-guessing had burst its dam.

But after a year of work on the book, it was time to let go.

Even so, as much as I look forward to releasing a book, it never gets easier to let go once and for all to publish. There’s always a voice in my head that whispers, “Maybe I can do one more proof and polish a few more things.”

The first shipment of 100 books is supposed to arrive tomorrow. There’s a mix of eager anticipation to see the final product and anxiety in hoping everything turned out right.

NEW BOOKMARKSBookmarkso

The new bookmarks came in the mail this week. The excitement of seeing the new bookmarks settled the book release butterflies for a short while. With only 12 days left until the book launch party, everything is coming together.

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Behind the scenes of ‘Book of Blank’ production wrap-up

The clock is ticking this week as production wraps up for “Sarah & Katy and the Book of Blank.” Here’s a look at what’s on the table this week:

Book Production

Last-minute edits are still taking place — I’m pushing up against deadline this year. Whereas last year I had the luxury of a couple of weeks of cushion, this year I’m racing against the clock. The reason is largely because last year, I didn’t plan to share the book until Christmas. This year, I’ve scheduled a few pre-release events in November, which means I need to have books in hand within the next three weeks. (Gulp.)

The big item on the checklist this week was sending the covers to prepress to make sure everything checks out. Covers need extra time for review to make sure no vital information is too close to edge and at risk of getting trimmed, as well as to make sure colors produce well, the bar code is in the proper location, and the spine is the right width.

The cover was submitted to the press Wednesday, so there’s a sigh of relief to be had there.

But the week isn’t over. Final tweaks to text still need to be made. (I am woefully late on doing these final edits of typos, missing words, etc.) Even though my instinct is to hurry up and get them done, I have to stay focused and thorough — I’d rather push back the release date than publish a sloppy book by the original deadline.

After that, the only task is to place the 10 interior illustrations from illustrator extraordinaire Hannah Jones. Then I’ll print proofs, do one last read-through for missed spelling or punctuation errors, and send it to press.

The goal is to finish everything by Saturday. Then it’s time to cross my fingers and hope production/shipping timetables work out to have books in hand by the week of Nov. 16.

Marketing

BookmarksBook of Blank’s listing on Goodreads went live this week. (Check it out here.) A Goodreads giveaway is coming in the near future — once shipping timetables are firmer and I can guarantee I’ll have books in stock, I’ll set up the giveaway.

I also ordered another round of bookmarks to hand out at book signings. This is good timing to get a fresh stack of bookmarks — the Imagination Blanket bookmarks have nearly run out.

About two weeks before the book’s release, I’ll be reaching out to local media with press releases and an announcement about the book launch party (more on that below).

This year I’ve considered enlisting the services of a blog tour as well. For those unfamiliar with the phrase, a blog tour is comprised of multiple bloggers hosting interviews, book reviews, or guest/promotional posts to share a new book release with their followers.

Pre-Release Book Launch Party

BlanketPlanning for a book launch party on Nov. 21 (three days before the official Nov. 24 release date) is in the works. I am partnering with Prairie Creek Public Library to host a pre-release event open to the public, which will have copies of the new book available for $10, as well as “Sarah & Katy and the Imagination Blankets” on sale for $5.

To add some fun to the event, I’m also collecting items for a raffle basket that will include signed copies of both Sarah & Katy books, an imagination blanket (shown at left), and a few other as-yet-t0-be-determined items. One idea is to order customized notebooks featuring the Book of Blank cover on them — that way the winner will their own “book of blank” to fill with a story of their own making.

One of the toughest parts of independent publishing is sticking to a budget. There are dozens of gifts I’d love to include in a raffle basket, but I have to keep a leash on my enthusiasm to make sure I’m not spending more than I’m earning on book sales.

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Cover reveal for Sarah & Katy and the Book of Blank

SKBB Cover Mystery

(Just so you know: This isn’t the cover. It’s just a teaser.
Scroll to the end to see the real thing!)

There are a lot of exciting moments as an independent author.

There’s the moment we type the final period on the first draft. There are all of the discoveries as we research the publishing process, such as how to acquire a Library of Congress Control Number or when we purchase a formatted copyright page.

But one of the most exciting moments — second only to holding the freshly published book in hand —  is when we get to see the cover.

I have the great fortune of partnering with Hannah Jones, who specializes in fantasy/fairy tale, children’s book, and fashion illustration. The anticipation of seeing her bring the story and characters to life is like a months-long Christmas. She captures the magic and imagination of the story. (Check out more of her artwork on her Facebook page. Her portfolio is extensive and gorgeous.)

Yesterday the cover art arrived in my inbox. Every time I see an email from Hannah, there’s that split second in which I wait to open it. There is joy in savoring the heightened anticipation. But then the curiosity and excitement get the best of me, and I urge my computer to download the attachments faster.

Upon seeing the completed cover art for the first time yesterday, I couldn’t be happier. And I couldn’t wait to share it.

So, ready to see the cover of “Sarah & Katy and the Book of Blank”?

Without further ado …

SKBB Cover

  • “Sarah & Katy and the Book of Blank” will be released Tuesday, Nov. 24.
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